Sunday, 2 October 2016

Film Pitch - Feedback


Film Pitch

For this activity, our class was split into three groups and we were sent off to create our own film and to also structure a presentation to pitch it to the rest of the class to see if they would buy the film rights.


                                         
Feedback
Teacher Feedback:

 Question

 Comments

 Grade
 Relevant/Intriguing/Catchy Film Title?

 Relevant + Intriguing
9
 Interesting Characters and appropriate cast?

Chloe is well cast but Stacey could be younger?
8
 Interest created for the audience? Enigma Codes?

  What is her special wish? - Audience is well engaged
9
 Narrative Suitable for Target Audience? Will it Attract Customers?

Escapism, making sure you live life to the fullest. Aniston will attract a wider audience.
9
Does the Narrative Fit the Conventions of the Narrative?

Lovely narrative - easy to follow for stay at home audience.
9
 Is the Film Different?
Yes, different teen twist

8
 Good Ideas for Marketing the Film?

Social Media/ Trailer
7
 Would You Buy the Film Rights?
Yes /No                                                                   
Total Grade

59

Peer Feedback:

 Question

 Comments

Grade
 Relevant/Intriguing/Catchy Film Title?

Love it - film poster

9

Interesting Characters and appropriate cast?

interesting and all the personalities fit. 
8
 Interest created for the audience? Enigma Codes?

Yes, I was asking questions throughout, like what happens to the young girl?
8

Narrative Suitable for Target Audience? Will it Attract Customers?

I think it will attract customers because this story line is very intriguing.
7

Does the Narrative Fit the Conventions of the Narrative?

All settings apply appropriately & are well thought out 
7

 Is the Film Different?

It is different. It is like a mix of different types of films.
7

Good Ideas for Marketing the Film?

Extremely thought out the strategy of promoting and selling this film to the public.

8

Would You Buy the Film Rights?

Yes /No                                                                   
Total Grade


54



1 comment:

  1. What was your overall impression from the feedback, what went well and even better if...

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